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Write a paragraph to describe your vacation

Write a paragraph to describe your vacation W8mx0
I am going to tell you about the most wonderful vacation for me. In the summer 3 years ago, my family and uncle's family went to the city of Dalat. It was the travel 2 weeks to enjoy. First, we went to the strawberry garden together. We could pick strawberry, If you want you can eat or pick bring back. Besides, I got climbing Thien Phuc Duc hill here I can see the magical scenery in Da Lat. Standing here I enjoyed atmosphere fresh make me feel comfortable and so relax. I really like the weather in Da Lat because it's change all day. In the morning and night it cold, the noon it sunny to the afternoon it rain, overcast. I remember the most of evening when we went to Dalat market together and enjoy food such as rice bake, avocado ice cream, . . . Eating out and talking together is happy. In addition, DaLat has other places such as Valley of Love, DaLat Flower Garden, Golden Valley. . . . I want to back again to the next year.
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Dalat
. It was the travel 2 weeks to enjoy.
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, we went to the strawberry garden together. We could pick strawberry, If you want you can eat or pick bring back.
Besides
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hill here I can
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Lat. Standing here I enjoyed atmosphere fresh
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me feel comfortable and
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relax. I
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like the weather in
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all day. In the morning and night it
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cold
, the noon
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it
sunny to the afternoon it
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rain
, overcast. I remember the
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most of evening
when we went to
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Dalat
market together and enjoy food such as rice bake, avocado ice cream
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Eating out and talking together is happy.
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DaLat
has other places such as Valley of
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Flower Garden, Golden Valley.
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I want to back again to the
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph to describe your vacation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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