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Write a paragraph to describe your FAVORTITE CLOTHES

Write a paragraph to describe your FAVORTITE CLOTHES nER0R
I talk about my favorite clothes. My favorite clothes is a T-shirt and jeans. I think that style is very popular. As for jeans I like torn jeans with colors black, grey or light grey because it easy to match. For T-shirts I want my T-shirt have eye-catching and beautiful picture prints or simple inscriptions. I like wearing a T-shirt and jeans because it very comfortable and they are fine for wearing to anywhere. But I wear them when I go out with my friends or family. It make me feel comfortable not get too fussy but still polite. When I stay at home, I choose clothes make me feel good such as pajamas with cotton or silk. In winter, I like wearing hoodie mixed with jacket or windbreaker it is very warm. I'm a fashion enthusiast, so in addition to that outfit, I like many different styles especially street style because it includes many different styles you can incorporate every outfit you want. I was attracted to beautiful, eye-catching, personality, dynamic and dusty ensembles along with sneakers. Besides, I also like outfit from luxury brands and sneaker but them very expensive so I don't have a lot of money pay for their.
I talk about my favorite clothes. My favorite clothes is a
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grey
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easy to match. For
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T-shirts
I want my
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T-shirt
have eye-catching and
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beautiful
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T-shirt
and jeans
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because
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it
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comfortable and
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I wear them when I go out with my friends or family. It
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me feel comfortable not
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polite. When I stay at home, I choose clothes
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such as pajamas with cotton or silk. In winter, I like wearing hoodie mixed with jacket or windbreaker it is
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warm. I'm a fashion enthusiast,
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many
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styles
especially
street
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because
it includes
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you can incorporate every outfit you want. I
was attracted
to
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beautiful
, eye-catching, personality, dynamic and dusty ensembles along with sneakers.
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, I
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph to describe your FAVORTITE CLOTHES

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
203 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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