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Write a paragraph on Vietnamese culture.

Write a paragraph on Vietnamese culture. wengN
Foreigners need to know three things when coming to Vietnam. Firstly, they need to pay attention to how they greet each other when they meet. Vietnamese culture has a disinclination to greet others by hugging and kissing them, so foreigners need to consider this carefully. Next, when going to someone's house, you should bring some gifts. For example, you could bring a bouquet of flowers, a fruit basket, or some cake. And the last thing to know is to take off your shoes when you get into someone's house. It shows that you are a polite, observant person and creates good sympathy for the host. In short, you need to know the above things so that you don't have to be surprised when coming to Vietnam.
Foreigners
need
to know three things when coming to Vietnam.
Firstly
, they
need
to pay attention to how they greet each other when they
meet
. Vietnamese culture has a disinclination to greet others by hugging and kissing them,
so
foreigners
need
to consider this
carefully
.
Next
, when going to someone's
house
, you should bring
some
gifts.
For example
, you could bring a bouquet of flowers, a fruit basket, or
some
cake. And the last thing to know is to take off your shoes when you
get
into someone's
house
. It
shows
that you are a polite, observant person and creates
good
sympathy for the host. In short, you
need
to know the above things
so
that you don't
have to
be surprised
when coming to Vietnam.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph on Vietnamese culture.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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