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write a paragraph of approximately 200 words to discuss your preference for information from the internet or from books.

write a paragraph of approximately 200 words to discuss your preference for information from the internet or from books. K3R50
The internet is the perfect tool for finding information. With the rapid development of technology, when it comes to searching information on the internet it is known for: quick, easy, and cheap. Firstly, the internet has covered almost everywhere in the world. Thanks to the advances in technology, people are able to access information more quickly. Users can enter the information just by a computer or a phone. Secondly, the internet interface is very simple and easy to use. The page for searching information on the internet is neatly laid out for the viewer to access. Not only the information can be easily found, but also highly accurate with just a few clicks. Lastly, the information on the internet is mostly free. Therefore, users can stay at home and look up information on the internet without having to leave the house. In addition, the internet is widely covered, the cost of access has become much cheaper. Many internet providers have made a lot of special offers for people with difficult economic conditions. In conclusion, the internet plays an important role in finding information for everyone.
The internet is the perfect tool for finding
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information
. With the rapid development of technology, when it
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comes
to searching
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information
on the internet it
is known
for: quick, easy, and
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cheap
.
Firstly
, the internet has covered almost everywhere in the world. Thanks to the advances in technology,
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people
are able to access
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information
more
quickly
. Users can enter the
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information
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just
by a computer or a phone.
Secondly
, the internet interface is
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very
simple and easy to
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use
. The page for searching
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information
on the internet is
neatly
laid out for the viewer to access. Not
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only
the
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information
can be
easily
found,
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but
also
highly
accurate with
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just
a few clicks.
Lastly
, the
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information
on the internet is
mostly
free.
Therefore
, users can stay at home and look up
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information
on the internet without having to
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leave
the
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house
.
In addition
, the internet is
widely
covered, the cost of access has become much cheaper.
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Many
internet providers have made
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a lot of
special offers for
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people
with difficult economic conditions.
In conclusion
, the internet plays an
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important
role in finding
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information
for everyone.
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IELTS essay write a paragraph of approximately 200 words to discuss your preference for information from the internet or from books.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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