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think of one your favorite places. write a descriptive paragraph

think of one your favorite places. write a descriptive paragraph 1b8E7
Nghe An – a heroic province, also the hometown of beloved President Ho Chi Minh with many majestic landscapes and the place where I was born and raised. Nghe An is located in the north-central part of Vietnam. There are four distinct seasons here. Spring is cool, summer is hot. Rainy autumns and bone-chilling winters. The administrative center of the province is Vinh City. My hometown has many tourist places, but perhaps "Thanh Chuong tea island" is my favorite place. It is located in the western part of Nghe An, which is famous for its extremely hot and dry climate, but coming here you will feel the coolness, the scent of fresh tea leaves blowing in the wind. The hills are covered with the immense green of tea trees, interspersed between the hills are clear blue lakes. When the rays of sunlight begin to shine, the whole tea hill becomes brilliantly beautiful and the fresh air makes you surprised and excited. Coming here, in addition to standing on the tea hills looking at the vast scenery, you can also buy a ticket to take a boat ride around the tea hill at the price of 100, 000 VND for 2 or 3 people on a trip. I think, you should take a boat around the island once - It's very interesting! "Thanh Chuong tea island" where you can freely take virtual pictures. You can enjoy lyrical folk songs. You can go to the flower hill "Triangle circuit" a purple horizon covered with flowers with many interesting activities. "Thanh Chuong tea island" is one of the poetic natural places of Nghe An. I love everything here.
Nghe
An
a heroic province,
also
the hometown of beloved President Ho Chi Minh with
many
majestic landscapes and the
place
where I
was born
and raised.
Nghe
An
is located
in the north-central part of Vietnam. There are four distinct seasons here. Spring is cool, summer is hot. Rainy autumns and bone-chilling winters. The administrative center of the province is
Vinh
City. My hometown has
many
tourist
places
,
but
perhaps
"
Thanh
Chuong
tea
island
"
is my favorite
place
. It
is located
in the western part of
Nghe
An,
which is
famous
for its
extremely
hot and dry climate,
but
coming here you will feel the coolness, the scent of fresh
tea
leaves
blowing in the wind. The
hills
are covered
with the immense green of
tea
trees, interspersed between the
hills
are
clear
blue lakes. When the rays of sunlight
begin
to shine, the whole
tea
hill
becomes
brilliantly
beautiful
and the fresh air
makes
you surprised and excited. Coming here,
in addition
to standing on the
tea
hills
looking at the vast scenery, you can
also
buy
a ticket to take a boat ride around the
tea
hill
at the price of 100, 000 VND for 2 or 3
people
on a trip. I
think
, you should take a boat around the
island
once
-
It's
very
interesting!
"
Thanh
Chuong
tea
island
"
where you can
freely
take virtual pictures. You can enjoy lyrical folk songs. You can go to the flower
hill
"
Triangle circuit
"
a purple horizon covered with flowers with
many
interesting activities.
"
Thanh
Chuong
tea
island
"
is one of the poetic natural
places
of
Nghe
An.
I
love
everything here.
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IELTS essay think of one your favorite places. write a descriptive paragraph

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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