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Write a paragraph of about 250 words to express your views on the statement saying that problematic students should not be grouped together with ordinary ones and they should be taught separately. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

Write a paragraph of about 250 words to express your views on the statement saying that problematic students should not be grouped together with ordinary ones and they should be taught separately. oRkWK
Nowadays, governments are encouraging everyone, especially children, to go to school, so most of the schools have admitted both problematic and normal students. However, troublesome ones sometimes are believed to be taught separately instead of learning with ordinary ones. In my opinion, I am also in favour of this statement for the reasons as follows. Firstly, when problematic students are separated into special classes, they can be taught by the teachers who are really knowledgeable and experienced in teaching these students. Accordingly, the separation will help schools reduce the rate of being stressed in pupils who is definitely different from normal ones. In addition, there are other advantages to ordinary students as well. They will be taught in such a much faster and more proper pace that all of their classmates are able to catch up with; thus, may improve those students' abilities completely. Last but not least, it is apparent that in schools, there will be fewer situations in which normal students play jokes on exceptional ones. To summarize, each school should divide their students between classes for problematic ones and classes for the rest in order to provide the best quality in teaching and learning.
Nowadays,
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governments
are encouraging everyone,
especially
children, to go to
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school
,
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so
most of the
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schools
have admitted both problematic and normal
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students
.
However
, troublesome
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ones
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sometimes
are believed
to
be taught
separately
instead
of learning with ordinary
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ones
. In my opinion, I am
also
in
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favour
of this statement for the reasons as follows.
Firstly
, when problematic
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students
are separated
into special classes, they can
be taught
by the teachers who are
really
knowledgeable and experienced in teaching these
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students
.
Accordingly
, the separation will
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help
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schools
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reduce
the rate of being
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stressed
in pupils who is definitely
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different
from normal
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ones
.
In addition
, there are other advantages to ordinary
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students
as well
. They will
be taught
in such a much faster and more proper pace that all of their classmates are able to catch up with;
thus
, may
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improve
those students' abilities completely. Last
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but
not least, it is apparent that in
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schools
, there will be fewer situations in which normal
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students
play jokes on exceptional
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ones
.
To summarize
, each
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school
should divide their
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students
between classes for problematic
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ones
and classes for the rest in order to provide the best quality in teaching and learning.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of about 250 words to express your views on the statement saying that problematic students should not be grouped together with ordinary ones and they should be taught separately.

Essay
  American English
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197 words
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