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Should governments spend money to come up with new inventions in order to make people’s lives easier, even if it means less money for improving the inventions and technology we already have?

Should governments spend money to come up with new inventions in order to make people’s lives easier, even if it means less money for improving the inventions and technology we already have? PVRAd
There is no doubt these days. Spending a significant amount of government badget in modern inventions to create effortless lives of the citizens. However, the question is, should government allocate most the money for new invention instead of the technology that they already have? In this essay, I’m going to discuss if spending the most part of budget on new technology right or not and I will share my opinion. There are many people believe that invest in new invention that can provide for them easier and newer life. First, when we remember our past life or what our grandparents told us about their lives and it was, we absolutely compare between our new lives and their past lives, that let us to think also to imagine how the lifestyle of the whole people were changed and how the new generation’s lives will be. For instance, they used to rid the camels when the decided to travel to anywhere and they maybe take long time to arrive to their destination, but now we have many options to arrive at what we want in short time. According to what I said there were huge development in technology to make our lives easier than them, how about if the government allows people to suggest new ideas or spend great money to create and invest for modern technology instead of that we already have. On the other hand, many individuals think don’t invest in a new invention, it is the best way to solve government’s budget and invest in new technology, it is dangerous and also put them in danger about losing money without any benefit. To sum up, in this essay I discussed if government could develop new inventions instead of the we already have.
There is no doubt these days. Spending a significant amount of
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badget
in modern inventions to create effortless
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lives
of the citizens.
However
, the question is, should
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government
allocate most the money for
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new
invention
instead
of the
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technology
that they already have? In this essay, I’m going to discuss if spending the most part of budget on
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new
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technology
right or not and I will share my opinion.

There are
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many
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people
believe that
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invest
in
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new
invention that can provide for them easier and newer life.

First
, when we remember our past life or what our grandparents
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told
us about their
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lives
and it was, we
absolutely
compare between our
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new
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lives
and their past
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lives
, that
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us to
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also
to imagine how the lifestyle of the whole
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people
were
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changed
and how the
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new
generation’s
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will be.

For instance
, they
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used
to rid the camels when the decided to travel to
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anywhere and
they maybe take long time to arrive to their destination,
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but
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now
we have
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many
options to arrive at what we want in short time. According to what I said there were huge development in
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technology
to
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make
our
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lives
easier than them, how about if the
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government
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allows
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people
to suggest
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new
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ideas
or spend great money to create and
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invest
for modern
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technology
instead
of that we already have.

On the other hand
,
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individuals
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invention, it is the best way to solve
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government’s
budget and
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in
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technology
, it is
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dangerous
and
also
put them in
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about losing money without any benefit.

To sum up, in this essay I discussed if
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could develop
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new
inventions
instead
of
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already have.
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IELTS essay Should governments spend money to come up with new inventions in order to make people’s lives easier, even if it means less money for improving the inventions and technology we already have?

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6 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
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