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It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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There is a public debate today that whether it is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. When it comes to this topic, some think that the leader has the power to control a group and a member has to obey the order. To be the leader is a common sense with most people, but is it a wise one? I think in some instances, to be a member is better for a person to contribute his power to a group. As what we know in our daily life, to be a member of a group will have much less stress about general performance. It is not astonished that to be the leader of a group will work with more pressure and responsibility. Without having a good ability of resist to the pressure, it is harder to provide the assist to a group when you're the leader than a member of a group. Furthermore, to be a member is easier to achieve efficiency through teamwork and improve oneself quickly by the cooperation with each team member. Just imagine that what it would be if you have a good experience with many team members who have excellent talents, that's no doubt you will learn a lot from your team members from a project. Finally, team member is a indispensable part of a group who can find out the problems that maybe not apparent for the leader. To be a member of a group will often have a different angle to analysis issue from the leader, which may take more benifits for a group. To the sum, it is true that “Every French soldier carries a marshal's baton in his knapsack“. However, the position of the leader is not suitable for everyone, in some situations, I believe that it is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group.
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is a common sense with most
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instances, to be a
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is better for a person to contribute his power to a group.

As what we know in our daily life, to be a
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member
of a
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group
will have much less
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stress
about general performance. It is not astonished that to be the
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leader
of a
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group
will work with more pressure and responsibility. Without having a
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ability of resist to the pressure, it is harder to provide the assist to a
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group
when you're the
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leader
than a
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member
of a group.

Furthermore
, to be a
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member
is easier to achieve efficiency through teamwork and
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oneself
quickly
by the cooperation with each
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member
.
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members
who have excellent talents, that's no doubt you will learn a lot from your
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team
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members
from a project.

Finally
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who can find out the problems that maybe not apparent for the
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. To be a
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angle to analysis issue from the
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, which may take more
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benifits
for a group.

To the sum, it is true that “Every French soldier carries a marshal's baton in his knapsack“.
However
, the position of the
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leader
is not suitable for everyone, in
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some
situations, I believe that it is better to be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
member
of a
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group
than to be the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
of a
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group
.

IELTS essay It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
323 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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