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Write a paragraph of about 150 words, beginning with the following sentence: Our life today has been improved in many ways…

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Our life today has been improved in many ways since technology has revolutionized our world and daily lives. Technology’s advancements have provided quicker ways to communicate through instant messaging apps and social media platforms. When it comes to the way we communicate overall, modern technology has had a powerful influence. Seniors can keep in touch with loved ones, while caregivers have new avenues to check in on aging parents or patients. Technology has also given us brand new devices in recent decades, like smartwatches, tablets, voice assistant devices. With these devices, we can do things like transfer money instantly and make purchases for everything from clothes, food delivery, groceries, furniture, etc. Technology has changed how we entertain ourselves, meet each other, and consume all types of media. It’s made fun advancements, but it’s also made important advancements in safety when it comes to home security and medical devices. With all of these revolutions, technology has also made our lives easier, faster, better, and funnier.

Our life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
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many
 ways since You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has revolutionized our world and daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
Technology’s
 advancements have provided quicker ways to communicate through instant messaging apps and social media platforms. When it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to the way we communicate overall
, modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has had a powerful influence. Seniors can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones, while caregivers have new avenues to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 in on aging parents or patients. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
Technology
 has also
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given
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brand new
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devices
 in recent decades, like smartwatches, tablets, voice assistant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
devices
. With these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
devices
, we can do things like transfer money instantly
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
 for everything from clothes, food delivery, groceries, furniture, etc. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
Technology
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 how we entertain ourselves, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 each other, and consume all types of media. It’s made fun advancements, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it’s also
 made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 advancements in safety when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to home security and medical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
devices
. With all of these revolutions, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has also
 made our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 easier, faster, better, and funnier. 