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plan and life achievements

plan and life achievements pLPqy
that's what i thought in the start, first of all we need to set some sort of equipment because it is going to help us later. when we finish our work, we going to use those equipment to furnish our houses. therefore, it is also suggested that people start thinking about how to manage their own stuff their own way, However, doing so is going to be just a pain in the head. thinking about what the future holds for you is just like a pancake that you try to cut without a knife, whether you cut it or not it is going to be eaten, duo to methods that people are thinking of, people usually pay attention to the method rather than the results, which cost them happiness of the results. so my advice is that you try to focus more on the goal of all of your methods and tries because those are the real reasons you are trying to achieve something after all. Now you must be asking what is the purpose of planning if it is not that much important? I never said that planning isn't important, instead i said that planning are just a method to achieve a target that you are seeking all this time to achieve, Consequently, achieving this target is much more important than the methods used to achieve this target. Therefore, we always recommend to not focus on small mistakes that happened during the plan, this will bring you headache and frustration.
that
's what
i
thought
in the
start
,
first of all
we need to set
some
sort of equipment
because
it is going to
help
us later.
when
we finish our work,
we going
to
use
those equipment
to furnish our
houses
.

therefore
, it is
also
suggested that
people
start
thinking about how to manage their
own
stuff their
own
way,
However
, doing
so
is going to be
just
a pain in the head.
thinking
about what the future holds for you is
just
like a pancake that you try to
cut
without a knife, whether you
cut
it or not it is going to
be eaten
, duo to
methods
that
people
are thinking of,
people
usually
pay attention to the
method
rather
than the results, which cost them happiness of the results.

so
my advice is that you try to focus more on the goal of all of your
methods
and tries
because
those are the real reasons you are trying to
achieve
something
after all
.

Now
you
must
be asking what is the purpose of planning if it is not that much
important
? I never said that planning isn't
important
,
instead
i
said that planning are
just
a
method
to
achieve
a target that you are seeking all this time to
achieve
,
Consequently
, achieving this target is much more
important
than the
methods
used
to
achieve
this target.
Therefore
, we always recommend to not focus on
small
mistakes that happened during the plan, this will bring you headache and frustration.
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IELTS essay plan and life achievements

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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