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Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the reason why teenagers should be encouraged to do household chores.

Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the reason why teenagers should be encouraged to do household chores. lX2eX
In the modern technology era, Housework is no longer the burden of housewives bacause of the help of modern devides such as washing machine, …. However, In my opinion teenagers should be encouraged to do household chores for the following reasons. Firstly, Doing housework helps teenagers practise life skills. When doing housework, teenagers wil know how to cook, do laundry. Those are some of the skills they will need after moving out. Secondly, household chores make teenagers learn to be independent and responsible. Assigning housework to teenagers regularly teach them to be more responsible and they will learn how to take care of themselves. Thirdly, Chores teach teenagers teambuilding skills. This is the perfect opportunity to teach them how to become team members who work for a common goal. There can be more time for family and fun! Morever, chores help teenagers to share the burden with their parents. For exmaple, teenagers help their parents with chores like together with parents to clean and main. When they work together to make a clean and beautiful house, doing housework will help family mambers become closer and happier with each other In summary, doing housework is very important to independent people and it enables us creat a happy family
In the modern technology era,
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Housework
is no longer the burden of housewives
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bacause
of the
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help
of modern
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devides
such as washing machine, ….
However
, In my opinion
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teenagers
should
be encouraged
to do household
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chores
for the following reasons.

Firstly
,
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Doing
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housework
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helps
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teenagers
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practise
life
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skills
. When
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doing
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housework
,
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teenagers
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wil
know how to cook, do laundry. Those are
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some of the
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skills
they will need after moving out.
Secondly
, household
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chores
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make
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teenagers
learn to be independent and responsible. Assigning
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housework
to
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teenagers
regularly
teach them to be more
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responsible and
they will learn how to take care of themselves.

Thirdly
,
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Chores
teach
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teenagers
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teambuilding
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skills
. This is the perfect opportunity to teach them how to become team members who work for a common goal. There can be more time for family and fun!
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Morever
,
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chores
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help
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teenagers
to share the burden with their parents. For
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exmaple
,
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teenagers
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help
their parents with
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chores
like together with parents to clean and main. When they work together to
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make
a clean and
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beautiful
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house
,
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doing
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housework
will
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help
family
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mambers
become closer and happier with each
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other


In summary,
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doing
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housework
is
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very
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important
to independent
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people
and it enables us
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creat
a happy family
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the reason why teenagers should be encouraged to do household chores.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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