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Write a paragraph of 150-200 words to answer the following questions: 'What do you think the "frontier spirit" means? In what ways did cowboys have a frontier spirit? How did the cowboy era affect American culture?'

Write a paragraph of 150-200 words to answer the following questions: 'What do you think the "frontier spirit" means? In what ways did cowboys have a frontier spirit? How did the cowboy era affect American culture? ' 2lrVj
Can speak "frontier spirit" was contribute not small to culture and clothes of many countries. So what is the meaning of "frontier spirit"? Each person will have a different answer and me is not an exception. In my opinion, the frontier spirit is linked to the ideology of “progress” and “manifest destiny" or “conquering”. It also is part of progress and our destiny. Most cowboys came from Asia or were African-American and it can be an element that cowboys have a frontier spirit. But the most reason came from their job, a cowboy wasn't an easy job because they need to take care of cattle through the journey and severe weather. Those difficult environments train the spirit of the cowboy. That's why many children were dreaming to be a cowboy because it represents for strong, steel spirit of a man. The good things that filmmakers do make us sometimes have a wrong view of life as well as the cowboy spirit. But undeniably the great influence of cowboys on today's young generation. It is already a fashion icon, such as the popular handbag named "Saddlebag" from a famous fashion house called Dior inspired by saddles. Or the trendy towel that cowboys wore every day called bandana was the indispensable item of young people these days. The conclusion is "frontier spirit" is a type of culture that we need to keep.
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frontier spirit
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? Each person will have a
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different
answer and me is not an exception. In my opinion, the frontier
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spirit
is linked
to the ideology of “progress” and “manifest destiny
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"
or “conquering”. It
also
is part of progress and our destiny. Most
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cowboys
came from Asia or were African-American and it can be an element that
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cowboys
have a frontier
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spirit
.
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the most reason came from their job, a
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cowboy
wasn't an easy job
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because
they need to take care of cattle through the journey and severe weather. Those difficult environments train the
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spirit
of the
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cowboy
. That's why
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many
children were dreaming to be a
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cowboy
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because
it represents for strong, steel
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spirit
of a
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man
. The
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cowboy
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spirit
.
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But
undeniably
the great influence of
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cowboys
on
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today
's young generation. It is already a fashion icon, such as the popular handbag named
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Saddlebag
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from a
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famous
fashion
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house
called Dior inspired by saddles. Or the trendy towel that
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cowboys
wore every day called
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bandana
was the indispensable item of young
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people
these days. The conclusion is
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frontier spirit
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is a type of culture that we need to
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keep
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of 150-200 words to answer the following questions: 'What do you think the "frontier spirit" means? In what ways did cowboys have a frontier spirit? How did the cowboy era affect American culture? '

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  American English
1 paragraphs
230 words
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