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Write a paragraph describing your dream job, a job you would like to have. Give reasons to support your ideas

Write a paragraph describing your dream job, a job you would like to have. Give reasons to support your ideas 1oMoq

When I was little I loved to make handmade things. Because of my ingenuity, my dream is to become a craftsman. I was in middle school, my favorite subject was crafting and i I won second place in a school craft competition. The special skill I learned from crafting is can showcase my creativity, ingenuity, sophistication and taste to end up with a unique piece like no other. And hand-made items are different from the popular machine-made items today. Each hand-made work shows the creativity and meticulousness of its maker. The items I love to make are dreamcatcher, knitting scarf, keychain. My dream is to open a small shop to sell these cute handmade things. This dream is difficult in the long run but it's a dream so I want to try to pursue it.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhomemade
handmade
 things. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of my ingenuity, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 is to become a craftsman. I was in middle school, my favorite subject was crafting and Possible typo: you repeated a wordi
i I
 won second place in a school craft competition. The special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 I learned from crafting is can showcase my creativity, ingenuity, sophistication and taste to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with a unique piece like no other. And hand-made items are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from the popular machine-made items This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. Each hand-made work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the creativity and meticulousness of its maker. The items I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 are Possible spelling mistake found.dream catcher
dreamcatcher
, knitting scarf, Possible spelling mistake found.key chain
keychain
. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 is to open a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shop to sell these cute You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhomemade
handmade
 things. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 is difficult in the long run This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it's a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I want to try to pursue it. 