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what do you think is the best leisure activity for teenagers

what do you think is the best leisure activity for teenagers 7L6P6
Playing badminton is good for teenagers and it is one of the great sports to exercise. . It’s a sport and it healthy. The game has a unique set of rules and gameplay. To play badminton the best, you must-have speed, strength, and exquisite. Besides playing badminton provide for my body with the required energy to help me go through each day. In badminton, there are six main shots: the serve, the clear, the drop, the smash, the forehand drive, and the backhand drive. The court on which badminton is played is in the shape of a rectangle and is divided in half by a net. There are two or four players, each team is on each side of the net. You often feel tired after you play it but I will be healthier and fitter than before. Anyway, I think badminton is the best sport for teenagers to play and exercise the body
Playing badminton is
good
for
teenagers
and it is one of the great sports to exercise.
.
It’s a sport and
it
healthy. The game has a unique set of
rules
and gameplay. To play badminton the best, you
must
-have speed, strength, and exquisite.
Besides
playing badminton provide for my body with the required energy to
help
me go through each day. In badminton, there are six main shots: the serve, the
clear
, the drop, the smash, the forehand drive, and the backhand drive. The court on which badminton
is played
is in the shape of a rectangle and
is divided
in half by a net. There are two or four players, each team is on each side of the net. You
often
feel tired after you play it
but
I will be healthier and fitter than
before
. Anyway, I
think
badminton is the best sport for
teenagers
to play and exercise the body
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IELTS essay what do you think is the best leisure activity for teenagers

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