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Write a paragraph describing a common fear. Pay attention to your paragraph structure, especially the topic sentence and supporting details. Try to provide an example using a conditional sentence. Your paragraph should be 150–200 words long. ▲

Write a paragraph describing a common fear. Pay attention to your paragraph structure, especially the topic sentence and supporting details. Try to provide an example using a conditional sentence. Your paragraph should be 150–200 words long. ▲ 9rGRr
We often scare of many things in own life, about spiders, snakes, nightmare, an exam, deadline, etc. the common fears now is spiders. The creature has eight legs, a pair of pliers with poisonous glands, a mouth without chewing jaws, and wings. There are 200 species of venom that are harmful to humans. People scared them just not only their shape, but also their poison inside the body. Some country where the spiders don’t have poison, but they are still a nightmare with people, why? For example, when I was three years old, My mom let me played alone with my toys, certainly, a spider from nowhere came to me, I see the first creatures with eight legs in my life, I had fear for no reason, but more creepy than when it comes to me closer and closer, I tried to run away but my body is frozen, so I can’t move or called anyone. It’s become a visible fear inside me, an obsession with spiders. The common fears of people have a lot, but each reason always has their experience in that, even brings nightmare to them every night.
We
often
scare of
many
things in
own
life, about
spiders
, snakes, nightmare, an exam, deadline, etc. the common
fears
now
is
spiders
. The creature has eight legs, a pair of pliers with poisonous glands, a mouth without chewing jaws, and wings. There are 200 species of venom that are harmful to humans.
People
scared them
just
not
only
their shape,
but
also
their poison inside the body.
Some
country where the
spiders
don’t have poison,
but
they are
still
a nightmare with
people
, why?
For example
, when I was three years
old
, My mom
let
me played alone with my toys,
certainly
, a
spider
from nowhere came to me, I
see
the
first
creatures with eight legs in my life, I had
fear
for no reason,
but
more creepy than when it
comes
to me closer and closer, I tried to run away
but
my body
is frozen
,
so
I can’t
move
or called anyone. It’s become a visible
fear
inside me, an obsession with
spiders
. The common
fears
of
people
have a lot,
but
each reason always has their experience in that, even brings nightmare to them every night.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph describing a common fear. Pay attention to your paragraph structure, especially the topic sentence and supporting details. Try to provide an example using a conditional sentence. Your paragraph should be 150–200 words long. ▲

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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