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My full name is Thien Thanh, which means blue sky, a meaningful name to me. I am currently studying as a senior at Cao Lanh City high school. I am starting IELTS to improve my ability to control and use English as fluently as possible. I think the it provides me with all the skills I need to master this language. Also, the IELTS is the entrance requirement for my favorite major- International Relations that I will try to apply to. I am really into Korean culture, especially Kpop and K-drama. Watching K-drama and enjoying Kpop music made me a new person, have positive energy and always motivate me to be better. Everyone told me that they really love my smile that makes them feel like I am always a sociable and energetic child. Apparently that is my biggest charm.
My full name is
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Thien
Thanh, which means blue sky, a meaningful name to me. I am
currently
studying as a senior at
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Cao
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Lanh
City high school. I am starting IELTS to
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improve
my ability to control and
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use
English as
fluently
as possible.
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I
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think
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the it
provides me with all the
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skills
I need to master this language.
Also
, the IELTS is the entrance requirement for my favorite major- International Relations that I will try to apply to. I am
really
into Korean culture,
especially
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Kpop
and K-drama. Watching K-drama and enjoying
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Kpop
music made me a new person, have
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positive
energy and always motivate me to be better. Everyone
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told
me that they
really
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love
my smile that
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makes
them feel like I am always a sociable and energetic child.
Apparently
that is
my biggest charm.

IELTS essay write a paragraph about yourself

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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