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Write a paragraph about your ideal office

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I’m a organized person so my office will be modern, clean and tidy. There is a office desk is right next to the window and a office chair should be comfortable. My computer and keyboard are on the desk, I check email everyday. On the wall, there is a clock and some pictures. In summer, the weather is quite hot so I will install the air conditioner. The photocopier is essential, Every office needs a photocopier to make copies of documents. In addition, I need highlighter helps me mark special information in a document and some other gadgets for exemple: folder, paper clip, ink cartridge… I put a small pot of bonsai on my desk, it helps me focus more on work. I look forward to my office in the future.
I’m
a
organized person
so
my
office
will be modern, clean and tidy. There is
a
office
desk is right
next
to the window and
a
office
chair should be comfortable. My computer and keyboard are on the desk, I
check
email
everyday
. On the wall, there is a clock and
some
pictures. In summer, the weather is quite hot
so
I will install the air conditioner. The photocopier is essential, Every
office
needs a photocopier to
make
copies of documents.
In addition
, I need highlighter
helps
me mark special information in a document and
some
other gadgets for
exemple
: folder, paper clip, ink cartridge… I put a
small
pot of bonsai on my desk, it
helps
me focus more on work. I look forward to my
office
in the future.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about your ideal office

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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