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Write a paragraph about your favorite dish using descriptive adjectives.

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There are many delicious dishes from different cuisines. I am an interested in many kinds of foods. How lucky we are, all delicious food is easily available to us. Although I am interested in many kinds of food, there is food that stands out as my favorite one. I easily walk past the pizzas, pasta, fried chicken, and cream cakes. But when I sit in the restaurant and see the words kebab with Iranian rice, I drool immediately. I remember the moment when my mother cooked kebab, she presses the meat around long, thick metal skewers and shape evenly and threaded tomatoes on another skewer. My parents barbecued each side for some minutes. The smell of kebabs filled the house and street. Then, my mother served kebab with hot Iranian rice and melted butter and tomato. Also, I sprinkled some sumac on top and poured tomato’s juice on rice. It has a very appetite smell and good texture too. I was crazy about it. Although People always like to try new flavors, I have a special craving for my mother’s kebab. Just think about it can make me hungry.
There are
many
delicious dishes from
different
cuisines. I am an interested in
many
kinds of
foods
. How lucky we are, all delicious
food
is
easily
available to us.

Although I
am interested
in
many
kinds of
food
, there is
food
that stands out as my favorite one.

I
easily
walk past the pizzas, pasta, fried chicken, and cream cakes.
But
when I sit in the restaurant and
see
the
words
kebab with Iranian rice, I drool immediately.

I remember the moment when my mother cooked kebab, she presses the meat around long, thick metal skewers and shape
evenly
and threaded tomatoes on another skewer. My parents barbecued each side for
some
minutes. The smell of kebabs filled the
house
and street.

Then, my mother served kebab with hot Iranian rice and melted butter and tomato.
Also
, I sprinkled
some
sumac on top and poured tomato’s juice on rice. It has a
very
appetite smell and
good
texture too. I was crazy about it.

Although
People
always like to try new flavors, I have a special craving for my mother’s kebab.
Just
think
about it can
make
me hungry.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about your favorite dish using descriptive adjectives.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
189 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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