Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Why do you want to apply in University

Why do you want to apply in University 8Gq8w
English is the second language that I have learned since childhood. but I don't have opportunity to used a language spoken every day. Makes me interested and want to speak, listen, read and write English. I am a person who likes English very much. When I was in school, I was enrolled in the English program, where I was able to talk to native speakers every day and like to participate in activities that require frequent communication with people. I also had the opportunity to attend an English camp, making me realize that I liked English even more. The reason I want to study in this faculty Because nowadays language is very important. is like a ticket in occupation and make it possible to communicate with people around the world. Bachelor of Arts Program in Language for Careers (International Program) Srinakharinwirot University It is an institution that I have foreseen that is ready in the field of knowledge. and not teaching but the content There are also many experiences from the teachers and everywhere I can bring them. to be applied in daily life. including being used in future careers. With my knowledge, ability, experience and determination It will be of great benefit to the institute. and I will use the knowledge I have gained in my honest life. and bring the knowledge to pass on to others.
English is the second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
that I have learned since childhood.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
but
I don't have opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
spoken every day.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Makes
me interested and want to speak, listen, read and write English.

I am a person who likes English
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much. When I was in school, I
was enrolled
in the English program, where I was able to talk to native speakers every day and like to participate in activities that require frequent communication with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

I
also
had the opportunity to attend an English camp, making me realize that I liked English even more.

The reason I want to study in this faculty
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
nowadays
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
is
like a ticket in occupation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it possible to communicate with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world.

Bachelor of Arts Program in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Language
for Careers (International Program)

Possible spelling mistake found.
Srinakharinwirot
University

It is an institution that I have foreseen
that is
ready in the field of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
and
not teaching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the content There are
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
experiences from the teachers and everywhere I can bring them.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
to
be applied
in daily life.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
including
being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in future careers.

With my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
, ability, experience and determination It will be of great benefit to the institute.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
and
I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
I have gained in my honest life.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
and
bring the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
to pass on to others.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Why do you want to apply in University

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
228 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts