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I was born in Viet Nam and have lived here for two decades. I clearly see and feel significant change of human life in Viet Nam especially since the industrial revolution 4.0 was launched in the federal republic of Germany in 2011. The advancement of technology has greatly improved the lives of mankind. However, everything has two aspects bad and goods, which makes people need more scrutiny of their life.

I was born in Viet Nam and have lived here for two decades. I clearly see and feel significant change of human life in Viet Nam especially since the industrial revolution 4. 0 was launched in the federal republic of Germany in 2011. The advancement of technology has greatly improved the lives of mankind. However, everything has two aspects bad and goods, which makes people need more scrutiny of their life. WgPPD
I was born in Viet Nam and have lived here for two decades. I clearly see and feel significant change of human life in Viet Nam especially since the industrial revolution 4. 0 was launched in the federal republic of Germany in 2011. The advancement of technology has greatly improved the lives of mankind. However, everything has two aspects bad and goods, which makes people need more scrutiny of their life.
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IELTS essay I was born in Viet Nam and have lived here for two decades. I clearly see and feel significant change of human life in Viet Nam especially since the industrial revolution 4. 0 was launched in the federal republic of Germany in 2011. The advancement of technology has greatly improved the lives of mankind. However, everything has two aspects bad and goods, which makes people need more scrutiny of their life.

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