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write a paragraph about the special building in your country/city and explain why it is important to protect them

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one of the specific ancient building in Iran is Soltanie Dom which is located in Zanjan province and also known as Oljaytu in some refrences. This building make by bricks and it is the biggest brickly dome in the world with double shell dome, the dome is covered by blue ceramics which seperate it from far distance to the travelers that inform them to rich the city. The restoration takes 13 years to restore the exterior facade which it demolish and erosion during the decades of phenomenon and wars. The economy of the city depends on this religious building which is an iconic and symbol for local people that improve the eco tourism in this area and inhabitants believes the Intrinsic value of this unique building for their existence.
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IELTS essay write a paragraph about the special building in your country/city and explain why it is important to protect them

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