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Steve Jobs has a saying: Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life. This statement is very true and it motivates me in difficult times. And I am sure that all of us have our own dreams, no matter how big or small, I hope you always remember them and keep them. If your dreams are to go abroad, explore the world, or become an international citizen, then you will not be without English-the language of the whole world. and my wish too to be an English translator. Start fulfilling your dreams today, starting small things, starting with learning English, learning steadily and consistently every day.
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is limited
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don't waste it living someone else's life. This statement is
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very
true and it motivates me in difficult times.

And I am sure that all of us have our
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own
dreams, no matter how
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big
or
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small
, I hope you always remember them and
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keep
them. If your dreams are to go abroad, explore the world, or become an international citizen, then you will not be without English-the language of the whole world.
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and
my wish too to be an English translator.

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Start
fulfilling your dreams
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today
, starting
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small
things, starting with learning English, learning
steadily
and
consistently
every day.
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IELTS essay write a paragraph about the person you would like to become

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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