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many people think social media websites have a negative effects on individual and society do you agree or disagree?

many people think social media websites have a negative effects on individual and society g5q07
Noone nowadays doesnot have social websites espically facebook. Individual and society can take adventage of social media websites through many ways but many people think reverse and see that they have a negative effects. Iam not comeletly agree with this opinion. social networks are very useful for one and society, one has facebook can communicate anyone abroad and chatting face to face easily. In addition to that, if individual has a website, he can enroll any courses in any website and has a certificates in short time, this will save time and effort. society can take advantage of social websites, through creating websites for serving people to finish some social papers like car license and birth certificates that will help society getting red of crowd in govrnmental centres. on other side some yung people can use sociah networks to waste time or creating pages to spread unreal news
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social
networks are
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very
useful for one and society, one has
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facebook
can communicate anyone abroad and chatting face to face
easily
.
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to that, if individual has a
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website
, he can enroll any courses in any
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website
and has
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a certificates
in short time, this will save time and effort.

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society
can take advantage of
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social
websites, through creating websites for serving
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people
to finish
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some
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papers like car license and birth certificates that will
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help
society getting red of crowd in
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govrnmental
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IELTS essay many people think social media websites have a negative effects on individual and society

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
147 words
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