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Write a paragraph about the adventages of life in the countryside

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Nowadays, more and more people tend to move from the countryside to the big city to find jobs especially the younger ones. Although the city has a number of benefits, there are several people living in the countryside. Because life in the countryside has its own advantages. Firstly, the connection of people in the same area are strongly. Because they meet each other almost every day, the children play together in a big group and become each other best friends. For instance, if you find someone in a town just ask people around there then you will easily get information from them. Secondly, the countryside is cleaned with fresh air, peaceful environment, etc. Most of the city drawback like traffic jams, noise pollution, light pollution, etc are rarely be found in the countryside. Finally, most inhabitants in the countryside are kind and friendly. When you visit a village the people there will be willing to help you as possible as they can. In addition, prices in rural areas are usually low-cost and affordable. In my opinion, those are the main advantages of life in the countryside. However, most of inhabitants are farmer or working related on agriculture so that the population are mostly senior people. The countryside needs to improve its living conditions and job opportunity to attract the young people.

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move
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countryside
 to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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people
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countryside
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countryside
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own
 advantages. Firstly
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people
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meet
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big
 group and become each other best friends. For instance
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just
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people
 around there then you will easily
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get
 information from them. Secondly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscenerylandterrainenvironmentsurroundingslandscape
countryside
is cleaned
 with fresh air, peaceful environment, etc. Most of the city drawback like traffic jams, noise pollution, light pollution, etc are rarely be found
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscenerylandterrainenvironmentsurroundingslandscape
countryside
. Finally
, most inhabitants in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscenerylandterrainenvironmentsurroundingslandscape
countryside
 are kind and friendly. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 you visit a village the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 there will be willing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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, prices in rural areas are usually
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countryside
. However
, After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the inhabitants") or simply say "most inhabitants".most of the inhabitantsmost inhabitants
most of inhabitants
 are farmer or working related on agriculture This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the population are mostly
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people
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscenerylandterrainenvironmentsurroundingslandscape
countryside
 needs to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
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people
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