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the huge ubiety of children at learn the school

the huge ubiety of children at learn the school Dw65E

These days, mind of the young are playing huge role at developing time. It is said that Knowledge wheretaken in young as pattern engraved to a rock. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of commencing the school earlier than others. Many people claim that we should teach our children earlier rather than on the time. I will determine several disadvantage and superiority in below two paragraphs. Preliminary thing to consider is that if we teach our children earlier that communcing of school, they might have more time than others to prepare to a university. Due to the fact If they can’t hand over to a university, , they can study extra one years else, owing to the fact that they are younger one year younger than classmates. Else one advantage is that their mind will develop better than others. On the contrary, there are a few disadvantage that they can’t feel interesting moment of their childhood. That is they can’t play with their friends all day. In light of the fact that they have to do homeworks. Consequently, they will spend their childhood with learning. But this challenge may bring succes to them in the future. If your children start to teach earlier, the children will probably be weak by less force than other classmates. Because their co- educational will be older than one year. One of the deficiency is that your children may not realise the lessons, because they are younger. In conclusion, there will have more superiority, if you commence the children to a school at earlier ages. But you may differ your children from childhood. From my point of view, Commencing is better. Owing to the the fact that the half of the childhood give to learn is betterthan to spend all the time by playing.

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 claim that we should teach our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
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. I will determine Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: "several disadvantages".several disadvantages
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 and superiority in below two paragraphs.

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children
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earlier
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fact
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one years
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fact
 that they are younger one year younger than classmates. Else one advantage is that their mind will develop better than others.

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few disadvantage
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fact
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have to
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homeworks
. Consequently
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succes
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children
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children
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 may not Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.realize
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 they are younger.

In conclusion
, there will have more superiority, if you commence the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 to a school at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorprevious
earlier
 ages. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 you may differ your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 from childhood. From my point of view, Commencing is better. Owing to Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
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betterthan
 to spend all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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