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Write a paragraph about the advantages of recycling

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Recycling is the process of collecting and processing materials that would otherwise be thrown away as trash and turning them into new products. Recycling can benefit our community and the environment. I want to mention two environmental issues that recycling specifically help to remedy. 1- Global warming and pollution Huge volume of waste which is dumped at sites is simply burned. However, doing so releases great volumes of CO2 into the air, this causes to the problem of global warming when carried out on a large scale. If increasing volumes of waste are recycled this means that the volumes of waste which are simply burnt, releasing harmful volumes of gasses into the air, are decreased. In this way, recycling can contribute to tackling one of the causes of global warming and pollution. 2- Conserve natural resources recycling involves reusing resources so it can help conserve the planet’s natural resources. In this way, recycling can help us slow the rate at which we extract and mine minerals and other resources from the earth, thus protecting and helping to conserve the earth’s natural resources for future generations.
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Recycling
is the process of collecting and processing materials that would
otherwise
be thrown
away as trash and turning them into new products.
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Recycling
can benefit our community and the environment.

I want to mention two environmental issues that
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recycling
specifically
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help
to remedy.

1- Global warming and pollution

Huge
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volume
of waste which
is dumped
at sites is
simply
burned.
However
, doing
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so
releases great
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volumes
of CO2 into the air, this causes to the problem of global warming when carried out on a large scale. If increasing
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volumes
of waste
are recycled
this means that the
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volumes
of waste which are
simply
burnt, releasing harmful
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volumes
of gasses into the air,
are decreased
. In this way,
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recycling
can contribute to tackling one of the causes of global warming and pollution.

2- Conserve natural resources

recycling involves reusing resources
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so
it can
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help
conserve the planet’s natural resources. In this way,
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recycling
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us slow the rate at which we extract and mine minerals and other resources from the earth,
thus
protecting and helping to conserve the earth’s natural resources for future generations.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about the advantages of recycling

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