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write a paragraph about popular trend

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My favorite trend. BMW is a new trend these days. It is popular because of its different shape from other cars. It is a big car. It has large and comfortable passenger sets. It has a rear view camera. It is easy to find. It travels great distances and is comfortable on long roads. There are two popular colors of it now. Dark blue and gold. The dark blue is gorgeous. Lots of people buy BMW because of this color. I think that trend will last for a long time.
My favorite trend.

BMW is a new trend these days. It is popular
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because
of its
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different
shape from other cars. It is a
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big
car.
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It
has large and comfortable passenger sets.
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It
has a
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rear view
camera.
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It
is easy to find.
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It
travels great distances and is comfortable on long roads. There are two popular colors of it
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now
. Dark blue and gold. The dark blue is gorgeous. Lots of
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people
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buy
BMW
because of this
color. I
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think
that trend will last for a long time.

IELTS essay write a paragraph about popular trend

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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