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write a paragraph about one of your favorite celebrations

write a paragraph about one of your favorite celebrations QKrN1

Christmas is undoubtedly my favorite holiday! Christmas is writhing with family to me. Christmas was originally observed on December 25th to commemorate the birth of Jesus. We frequently adorn their houses with lights, Christmas trees, and other decorations in the weeks leading up to Christmas, in preparation for the special dinner of the day. Furthermore, youngsters will be hanging their Christmas stockings in the hopes of receiving some nice presents from Santa Claus. Everyone goes to church after supper and prays to God, admitting their faults and afflictions, as well as their wishes for health and happiness. On Christmas Eve, many schools and businesses are closed so that family may spend time together. The most well-known icon is Santa Claus, an elderly guy with long white hair, a beard, and a red cloak who is trusted by children to bring us gifts at Christmas. // Perhaps one of the most significant holidays is Christmas, when everyone comes together and relaxes after a year of hard work. When I'm with my family, this year's Christmas has a special meaning for me. And I'm ecstatic, my darling. Christmas is a wonderful time of year!

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