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Write a paragraph about Advantages of learning online.

Write a paragraph about Advantages of learning online. qRMVX
Studying online helps people espesially students stay at home during break period beacause of covid 19. Firstly, Thanks to online classes students do not have to go outside and face traffic jams, so that air pollution can be reduced. As a result, it brings a good impact to the environment such as helping the air become more freshly. Another positive impact for this idea, learning online may save more time for students to join. They just need a few minutes to connect with the internet and participate in the class. That is a resson why students may have more time to rest and get ready for a long lesson. Thus, people who will join online classes might be more energetic. Moreover, Students may have an opportunity to approach many sources of information thanks to internet connection. As a result, people can work and learn more effectively.
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helps
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people
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espesially
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stay at home during break period
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online
classes
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students
do not
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have to
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so
that air pollution can be
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reduced
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good
impact to the environment such as helping the air become more
freshly
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positive
impact for this
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, learning
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may save more time for
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students
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join
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just
need a few minutes to connect with the internet and participate in the
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class
.
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resson
why
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students
may have more time to rest and
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get
ready for a long lesson.
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,
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people
who will
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join
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online
classes might be more energetic.
Moreover
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Students
may have an opportunity to approach
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many
sources of information thanks to internet connection.
As a result
,
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people
can work and learn more
effectively
.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about Advantages of learning online.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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