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I read a book About a fabulous actor, in her 25th year, works day and night to fell her loneliness, she started working on new film, she stay up late night before studying the script, she woke up 5am everyday and works hard with a dummy main actor till midnight, one day she met a man, he’s 27 handsome, tall, and she met him 2 years before in Guadalcanal during Second World War 1943, she can’t forget him, his been in her head everyday, specially his handsome face, she retired and ended her career for him, she was insanely in love with him, as same he was. Thy married, had a fife children, and Seattle down in their huge house, they had everything, and lost it by well.

I read a book About a fabulous actor, in her 25th year, works day and night to fell her loneliness, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 working on new film, she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "stays", "staid", "stayed".staysstaidstayed
stay
 up late night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 studying the script, she woke up 5am 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 and works This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 with a dummy main actor till midnight, one day she met a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
, he’s 27 handsome, tall, and she met him 2 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 in Guadalcanal during Second World War 1943, she can’t forget him, his been in her head 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
, specially
 his handsome face, she retired and ended her career for him, she was insanely
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 with him, as same he was. Thy married, had a fife children, and Seattle down in their huge This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, they had everything, and lost it by well. 