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Write a paragraph (about 150 words) to disagree with the statement.

Write a paragraph (about 150 words) to disagree with the statement. 2rRyo

I believe that excessive processed foods consumption could do harm to people's health. One negative impact is that convenient foods are high in calories, saturated fat, sugar, salt, and trans fat, while they are low in nutrition. Therefore, it is more difficult to control body weight and fat, which could lead to increasing risks of contracting diabete. Convenient foods have become widely popular especially amongworking class people, teenage children, people living in hostels, bachelors, sharing rooms etc. Convenience foods are used to shorten the time of meal preparation at home. Some convenient foods can be eaten immediately or after adding some water, heating or thawing.

I believe that excessive processed Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "foods'" or "food's"?foods'food's
foods
 consumption could do harm to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's health. One This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact is that convenient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 are high in calories, saturated This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
, sugar, salt, and trans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
, while they are low in nutrition. Therefore
, it is more difficult to control body weight and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
, which could lead to increasing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
risks
 of contracting Possible spelling mistake found.diabetes
diabete
. Convenient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 have become widely
 popular especially
Possible spelling mistake found.among working
amongworking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, teenage children, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 living in hostels,

bachelors, sharing rooms etc. Convenience You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to shorten the time

of meal preparation at home. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 convenient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 can be eaten
 immediately or

after adding This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 water, heating or thawing. 