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All children should study a foreign language starting in the earliest grades.

All children should study a foreign language starting in the earliest grades. 06E9Q
It is universally acknowledged that foreign language is one of the hardest subjects to learn. One either has to possess adequate skill or time in order to fully indulge in it. Owing to this belief, enforcing children to pick up new languages has been considered. Some parents would decry that shoving innate tongues to their children is inappropriate. The complex information that a language holds might cause them stress and thus, distract them from other subjects in school. It has to be noted, however, that this consensus can easily backfire to any lesson taught in classes as every child has a different comprehensive ability. So the concept of language having too many materials is not a strong reason to stop children from learning a new one. In the midst of our developing world, foreign language has a major part in keeping people overseas in contact with each other. Through this relationship, they pass on insights so they can learn and make use of the information given. Hence, our mother tongue alone is not sufficient to help us survive modernity. In fact, speaking several languages is now a high-requested proficiency amongst big companies. Acquiring new languages is now a must for students to develop a useful skill in their future career. Another benefit is that the learning process grows the children’s soft skills. Communication, for example, is paramount in language learning because it forces the users to interact as much as possible. Despite the incoherence, learners are instructed to be unafraid of approaching and behaving in a friendly manner. This indicates that the ability to speak up and socialize ensues from studying native languages. Conclusively, early exposure of foreign languages to students may cost them immense time and effort but for what it’s worth, studying it is necessary for their communication skill and future.
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universally
acknowledged that foreign
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language
is one of the hardest subjects to learn. One either
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has to
possess adequate
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skill
or time in order to
fully
indulge in it. Owing to this belief, enforcing
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children
to pick up new
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languages
has
been considered
.

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Some
parents would decry that shoving innate tongues to their
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children
is inappropriate. The complex information that a
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language
holds might cause them
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stress
and
thus
, distract them from other subjects in school. It
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has to
be noted
,
however
, that this consensus can
easily
backfire to any lesson taught in classes as every child has a
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different
comprehensive ability.
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So
the concept of
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language
having too
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many
materials is not a strong reason to
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stop
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children
from learning a new one.

In the midst of our developing world, foreign
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language
has a major part in keeping
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people
overseas in contact with each other. Through this relationship, they pass on insights
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so
they can learn and
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make
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use
of the information
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given
.
Hence
, our mother tongue alone is not sufficient to
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help
us survive modernity. In fact, speaking several
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languages
is
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now
a high-requested proficiency amongst
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big
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companies
. Acquiring new
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languages
is
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now
a
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must
for students to develop a useful
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skill
in their future career.

Another benefit is that the learning process grows the
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children’s
soft
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skills
. Communication,
for example
, is paramount in
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language
learning
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because
it forces the users to interact as much as possible. Despite the incoherence, learners
are instructed
to be unafraid of approaching and behaving
Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with the adverb for "friendly"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a friendly manner
. This indicates that the ability to speak up and socialize ensues from studying native languages.

Conclusively
, early exposure of foreign
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languages
to students may cost them immense time and effort
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but
for what it’s worth, studying it is necessary for their communication
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skill
and future.
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IELTS essay All children should study a foreign language starting in the earliest grades.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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