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Write a paragraph (120-250 words) about a gift you have received from your

Write a paragraph (120-250 words) about a gift you have received from your X7nGw

When it comes to his birthday, everyone looks forward to great gifts. And me too when I was in 10th grade on my birthday, my parents gave me a black iPhone 7. Oh, my feeling was so good I was consequently excited and screamed. For me, that gift is very meaningful in light of the fact that it can help me a lot in learning as well as having fun. In learning, I can use it to search for documents, talk to people about difficult exercises. Besides, it also helps me save memorable moments, entertains me after stressful school hours. I'm using a new phone now due to the fact that I accidentally dropped it from above and couldn't fix it anymore. However, I still keep it in my closet carefully because it means a lot when I receive such a great value for the first time. I love it so much.

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