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WRITE A PARAGHRAP ABOUT FRIGHTENING EXPERIENCE

WRITE A PARAGHRAP ABOUT FRIGHTENING EXPERIENCE okYlg

I can never forget that day. That was when i was little I was really scared of the dark. One night, i have to look after the house alone because my parents need to go to my Aunt's house. While i was listening to music in the living, suddently it started to rained heavily so i went outside to close the door. right after the moment i locked the door a black covered the whole house, it was a power outage, my fear of the dark arose I crouched down to sit still, not daring to move, I could clearly hear the thunder and the sound of branches tree hit the window. I was sitting Like that till i heard a knock door i was so scared to open the door. Then i heard my mother calling me to open the door at the same time the electricity came back on. I felt like i been rescue from the death.

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little
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 scared of the dark. One night, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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have to
 look after the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 alone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my parents need to go to my Aunt's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. While Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 was listening to music in the living, Possible spelling mistake found.suddenly
suddently
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to rained heavily
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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i
 went outside to close the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgateexit
door
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRight
right
 after the moment Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 locked the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgateexit
door
 a black covered the whole This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, it was a power outage, my fear of the dark arose I crouched down to sit still
, not daring to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
, I could clearly
 hear the thunder and the sound of branches tree hit the window. I was sitting Like that till Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 heard a knock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgateexit
door
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 scared to open the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgateexit
door
. Then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 heard my mother calling me to open the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgateexit
door
 at the same time the electricity came back on. I felt like Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 been rescue from the death. 