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Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party In the letter you should what the activity is what you planed why it is important that your friend should come v.1

Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party In the letter you should what the activity is what you planed why it is important that your friend should come v. 1
It is argued that energy-saving modes of transportation, such as battery and solar vehicles, are beneficial to people; others claim that the traditional transportation system is efficient. This essay will elucidate the usages of these transportation modes and why energy-saving transport is superior. To begin with, there are numerous reasons to advocate why eco-friendly vehicles are advantageous. Firstly, the development of hybrid cars and bicycles can reduce the exploitation of fossil fuels drastically. It is irrefutably true that the ground resources have been over-exploited for many years as it has been used to produce oil and fuels for vehicles. To exemplify, according to the report of The Ministry of Oil and Gas, over 50 thousand litres of fossil fuels have been extracted from agricultural areas, which degrades the land and makes it unsuitable for cultivation. Hence, renewable energy can replace ground resources. Besides, it is evident that engines which use fuels emit carbon-di-oxide; therefore contributes to the global warming issue tremendously. However, the current travelling system is inevitable as it provides various benefits. One of the primary merits of the usual transport system is, it saves enormous time. Buses and trains are the fastest modes of transportation compared to any energy-saving vehicles that have been invented so far. To illustrate, although there are myriads of battery bikes have been launched, people show interest in motorbikes due to its speed and durability. Thus, fuel vehicles have considerable upsides. In conclusion, even though motor vehicles can significantly improve the transportation system, energy-saving modes of transportation help in saving agriculture regions as well as deter climate change issue.
It
is argued
that energy-saving
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modes
of
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transportation
, such as battery and solar
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vehicles
, are beneficial to
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people
; others claim that the traditional
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transportation
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system
is efficient. This essay will elucidate the usages of these
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transportation
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modes
and why energy-saving transport is superior.

To
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begin
with, there are numerous reasons to advocate why eco-friendly
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vehicles
are advantageous.
Firstly
, the development of hybrid cars and bicycles can
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reduce
the exploitation of fossil
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fuels
drastically
. It is
irrefutably
true that the ground resources have been over-exploited for
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many
years as it has been
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used
to produce oil and
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fuels
for
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vehicles
. To exemplify, according to the report of The Ministry of Oil and Gas, over 50 thousand
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litres
of fossil
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fuels
have
been extracted
from agricultural areas, which degrades the land and
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makes
it unsuitable for cultivation.
Hence
, renewable energy can replace ground resources.
Besides
, it is evident that engines which
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use
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fuels
emit
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carbon-di-oxide
;
therefore
contributes to the global warming issue
tremendously
.

However
, the
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current
travelling
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system
is inevitable as it provides various benefits. One of the primary merits of the usual transport
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system
is, it saves enormous time. Buses and trains are the fastest
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modes
of
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transportation
compared to any energy-saving
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vehicles
that have
been invented
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so
far. To illustrate, although there are myriads of battery bikes have
been launched
,
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people
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show
interest in motorbikes due to its speed and durability.
Thus
,
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fuel
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vehicles
have considerable upsides.

In conclusion
,
even though
motor
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vehicles
can
significantly
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improve
the
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transportation
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system
, energy-saving
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modes
of
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transportation
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help
in saving agriculture regions
as well
as deter climate
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change
issue.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party In the letter you should what the activity is what you planed why it is important that your friend should come v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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