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Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment v.1

Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment v. 1
Some would argue that the Government alone cannot tackle the environmental predicaments without support from the people. While others believe that, the problem is too substantial for individuals to deal with. This should be carefully addressed by the public. The Government should also involve and handle the problems along with the assistance from people. To begin with, major environmental damages are occurring in the contemporary world are due to global warming and pollution from vehicles. If clearly observed, these are not that big to avoid and ignored by the public, if these damages are controlled by bringing electric vehicles all over the states and preventing polluting the air, water, that would drastically bring down the damage levels. But, for doing this an individual cannot bring the change at once, a team should be formed and proper channeling of the source should be addressed to the superior authorities such as the Government. For example, Netherlands Government is so transparent that every person in the city can know what are the daily updates and changes made to the budget or the development of the country. The Government should also be supportive enough and accessible for all the incoming grievances, immediacy resolving of the issues as they appear could be soothing to public and they feel confident about their administration to save the environment with the provided assistance from the organizations. Offering perks or grants could possibly bring more support thus emphasizing the environment saving program and advertising about campaigns also improves the reachability, these kind of assistance if the Government could provide every man and women out there would feel responsible and provide their best in curbing the environmental damages. For instance, Russian Government provides the resources as per public demands and requirement for conserving the energy and to stop pollution and it turned out to be the first green country with 100 percent of electric vehicles and zero pollution. To conclude, although individuals could handle the issue related to environment, the Government should also extend their helping hand and work mutually with public to yield the fruitful results that can save the environment and develop the country.
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Some
would argue that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
alone cannot tackle the environmental predicaments without support from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. While others believe that, the problem is too substantial for individuals to deal with. This should be
carefully
addressed by the
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public
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
should
also
involve and handle the problems along with the assistance from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, major environmental damages are occurring in the contemporary world are due to global warming and pollution from vehicles. If
clearly
observed, these are not that
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big
to avoid and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
, if these damages
are controlled
by bringing electric vehicles all over the states and preventing polluting the air, water, that would
drastically
bring down the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
damage
levels.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, for doing this an individual cannot bring the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
at once, a team should
be formed
and proper channeling of the source should
be addressed
to the superior authorities such as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
.
For example
, Netherlands
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Government
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
transparent that every person in the city can know what are the daily updates and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
made to the budget or the development of the country.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
should
also
be supportive
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
and accessible for all the incoming grievances, immediacy resolving of the issues as they appear could be soothing to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
public and
they feel confident about their administration to save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
with the provided assistance from the organizations. Offering perks or grants could
possibly
bring more support
thus
emphasizing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
saving program and advertising about campaigns
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
the
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reachability
,
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these kind
of assistance if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
could provide every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
and women out there would feel responsible and provide their best in curbing the environmental damages.
For instance
, Russian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
provides the resources as per
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
demands and requirement for conserving the energy and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
pollution and it turned out to be the
first
green country with 100 percent of electric vehicles and zero pollution.

To conclude
, although individuals could handle the issue related to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Government
should
also
extend their helping hand and work
mutually
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
to yield the fruitful results that can save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
and develop the country.
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IELTS essay Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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