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Write a description of a friend you know well

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I would like to tell you about my best friend. her name is Trang, she is the same age as me. we met about 10 years ago, I and her were classmates. She is the most understanding me I have ever met. she's humorous, intelligent, approachable, and nice. Let me tell you a little bit about her physical appearance. she's a little bit taller than me. she has long black hair, brown eyes and is very good-looking. we have a lot in common. for instance, both of us like watching films in Korea, reading books, listening to music, . . . she is good as a student, she always helps me and my weak friends in their studies. I really like her. Although time has passed long in any case, Trang and I also trying to keep this friendship.
I would like to
tell
you about my best friend.
her
name is
Trang
, she is the same age as me. we met about 10 years ago, I and her were classmates. She is the most understanding me I have ever met.
she
's humorous, intelligent, approachable, and nice.
Let
me
tell
you a
little bit
about her physical appearance.
she
's a
little bit
taller than me. she has long black hair, brown eyes and is
very
good
-looking.
we
have a lot in common.
for
instance, both of us like watching films in Korea, reading books, listening to music
, .
.
.
she
is
good
as a student, she always
helps
me and my weak friends in their studies. I
really
like her. Although time has passed long in any case,
Trang
and I
also
trying to
keep
this friendship.
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IELTS essay Write a description of a friend you know well

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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