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Write a composition (250 words) about the following topic: "How do movies and television influence people’s behavior?" Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Write a composition (250 words) about the following topic: "How do movies and television influence people’s behavior? " Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. gqnjL
Nowadays, it is undeniable that movies and television have enormous effects on our behaviour. Some people maintain that the effects it provides are good but contrary to the idea that it is good, some individuals believe it is good for nothing. From a neutral’s point of view, I will show you the good and bad influence that this kind of entertainment provides us by the following information and example which will be elaborated further in this essay. In the first place, Movies and television influence people (especially children)'s behaviour by violence scenes. Violence on TV often makes a deep impression on viewers because violence is often portrayed as a form of entertainment and an effective way to get what we want, so viewers usually tend to imitate those scenes in the films so nowadays if we suft the internet well will see a lot of video whose the actors and actresses use knife and are rough-spoken and it makes our social cultural be damaged. Moreover, We may experience behavioral disturbances, nightmares, and trouble sleeping from viewing violence in the media. And sometimes it leads people to crime.
Nowadays, it is undeniable that movies and television have enormous effects on our
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behaviour
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people
maintain that the effects it provides are
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good
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but
contrary to the
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idea
that it is
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good
,
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some
individuals believe it is
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good
for nothing. From a neutral’s point of view, I will
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show
you the
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good
and
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influence that this kind of entertainment provides us by the following information and example which will
be elaborated
further
in this essay.

In the
first
place, Movies and television influence
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people
(
especially
children)'s
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behaviour
by
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violence
scenes.
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Violence
on TV
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often
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makes
a deep impression on viewers
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because
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violence
is
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often
portrayed as a form of entertainment and an effective way to
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get
what we want,
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so
viewers
usually
tend to imitate those scenes in the films
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so
nowadays if we
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suft
the internet well will
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see
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a lot of
video
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whose
the actors and actresses
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use
knife and are rough-spoken and it
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makes
our social cultural
be damaged
.
Moreover
, We may experience behavioral disturbances, nightmares, and trouble sleeping from viewing
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violence
in the media. And
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sometimes
it leads
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people
to crime.
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IELTS essay Write a composition (250 words) about the following topic: "How do movies and television influence people’s behavior? " Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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