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Write a comparison and contrast paragraph about the difference OR similar between urban(City) and rural (the countryside) v.1

Write a comparison and contrast paragraph about the difference OR similar between urban(City) and rural (the countryside) v. 1
It has been a huge gap between an urban area and a rural area, and it is reflected on three main aspects of each place. In one aspect, lifestyles can be differed greatly from cities to the countryside. City residents tend to lead a fast-paced lifestyle since where they live is fast growing. That means that they have to keep up and adapt quickly to changes. In contrast, the life in rural areas is much simpler, so it often allows residents to live more freely. For instance, it is common to see the neighbourhoods as an integral part of the countryside life, which makes the rural residents famous for their friendliness lifestyle. Resources is another distinguishing aspect of life. Resources in cities focus mainly on facilities, such as transportation systems and commercial buildings which means that cities possess more of the potential to become one of the biggest economic centres of one country. On the other hand, the rural draws people to its natural resources and are the places most likely to attract tourism projects and its potential investors. Lastly, living conditions is what makes the biggest differences between the two areas. Citizens deem to have more access to the latest advancements in technology and the availability of necessities including electricity or water supply. Conversely, rural inhabitants often afford more amenities, such as wider open areas and bigger living spaces. Although there seem to be similarities between cities and the countryside, it is lifestyles, resources, and living conditions that make the two places differentiated noticeably.
It has been a huge gap between an urban
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area
and a
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rural
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area
, and it
is reflected
on three main aspects of each place. In one aspect,
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lifestyles
can
be differed
greatly
from
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cities
to the countryside. City residents tend to lead a
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fast
-paced
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lifestyle
since where they
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live
is
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fast
growing. That means that they
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have to
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keep
up and adapt
quickly
to
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changes
.
In contrast
, the life in
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rural
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areas
is much simpler,
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so
it
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often
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allows
residents to
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live
more
freely
.
For instance
, it is common to
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see
the
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neighbourhoods
as an integral part of the countryside life, which
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makes
the
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rural
residents
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famous
for their friendliness
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lifestyle
. Resources
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is
another distinguishing aspect of life. Resources in
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cities
focus
mainly
on facilities, such as transportation systems and commercial buildings which means that
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cities
possess more of the potential to become one of the biggest economic
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centres
of one country.
On the other hand
, the
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rural
draws
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people
to its natural resources and are the places most likely to attract tourism projects and its potential investors.
Lastly
, living conditions is what
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makes
the biggest differences between the two
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areas
. Citizens deem to have more access to the latest advancements in technology and the availability of necessities including electricity or water supply.
Conversely
,
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rural
inhabitants
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often
afford more amenities, such as wider open
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areas
and bigger living spaces. Although there seem to be similarities between
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cities
and the countryside, it is
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lifestyles
, resources, and living conditions that
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make
the two places differentiated
noticeably
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a comparison and contrast paragraph about the difference OR similar between urban(City) and rural (the countryside) v. 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
255 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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