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How technology effects on people

How technology effects on people eEW2B
technology now has been essential to our life nowadays, specially after the pandemic. people in many fields use the technology. technology is main head that can come under it many categories such as, internet - electronic devices used to help this technology. For example we use technology in Schools, social life, work. in this pandemic everything changed to be remotely and technology took place. Many people used technology in good way, also another people use it in bad way, good way like
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people
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technology
is main head that can
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categories such as, internet
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electronic devices
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help
this
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in Schools, social life, work.
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in
this pandemic everything
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changed
to be
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took place.
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people
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IELTS essay How technology effects on people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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