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Write a brief introducion to attract him to visit your village

Write a brief introducion to attract him to visit your village RWXPp
Where will you visit in your holiday? If you don’t know anywhere, I will introduce to you, my village. It located in Ha Noi City-the capital of Viet Nam. My village was divided by a river so it has two areas. When you come here, the first thing you see is welcome gate, it was built a long time ago. You can see many houses are in close proximity to one another. It has a banyan tree in the center in my village. People in here is also friendly and easy-going. They often make Do cake or Chung cake to sell in festivals. Some people live on sell vegetables, fruits or daily things. That is my village. It’s a good place. Do you like it? If you have a chance, please come here once in your life.
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also
friendly and easy-going. They
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Do cake or Chung cake to sell in festivals.
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people
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my
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. It’s a
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IELTS essay Write a brief introducion to attract him to visit your village

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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