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Is internet the mandkind's most important invention

Is internet the mandkind's most important invention XoXew

Due to the growth of technology, many related inventions have been created. From my point of view, I am a protagonist of the opinion that the internet is the greatest creation of humanity. First of all, the residents in modern society can communicate with relatives or foreigners with effortless. For instance, back in 1900, to contact individuals who live far away, the masses would have to book a train or buy a ticket to meet them face to face. However, as the internet has been invented, people can easily have a call or even video call with who they want. Secondly, the network media is an inexhaustible resource of information as well as knowledge. The internet can easily give an account of any information that the citizens need. Additionally, some news cannot be found in books or articles for its virtually so it has shown a crucial role in our life. In conclusion, the network has become the most vital invention of mankind without fail

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