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Nowadays, people can use the internet to do an increasing number of tasks.

Nowadays, people can use the internet to do an increasing number of tasks. bOXBQ

Currently many people are able to utilize the internet to accomplish a numerous number of tasks in view of the fact that broadband internet services that could not have been imagined before. In my opinion, this is a large positive development and should be encouraged. First, electronic devices and online network are two inseparable things and both of them help with international or intercity communication. Especially due to covid-19 virus that has spread around the world this past 2 years which not allow people to have an intents physical contact with each other, we cannot visit public area such as school, office, mall, shopping centre, and many more. Since we should spend more time to stay at home, we have to use the internet to work, study, shop and other activities to full fil our needs and as a way for people to continue living their life. For illustration children have to study remotely using a laptop and phone cell, adults have to work by telecommuting, warehouse and store adapt and turn to an online shop and so on. To repeat in short, people nowadays can’t live without the internet since we use it for everything, Everyone can use the internet to complete innumerable tasks thanks to the modern internet that can solve difficult and unimaginable jobs on this world wide pandemic. According to my way of thinking we should try to develop the internet in a beneficial way.

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 are able to utilize the internet to accomplish a numerous number of tasks in view of the fact that broadband internet services that could not have been imagined
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help
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covid-19
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allow
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people
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centre
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many
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have to
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 our needs and as a way for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to continue living their life. For illustration children This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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 using a laptop and phone cell, adults This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 work by telecommuting, warehouse and store adapt and turn to an online shop and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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To repeat in short, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 nowadays can’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 without the internet since we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it for everything, Everyone can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet to complete innumerable tasks thanks to the modern internet that can solve difficult and unimaginable jobs on this Did you mean "worldwide"?worldwide
world wide
 pandemic. According to my way of thinking we should try to develop the internet Consider replacing "in a beneficial way" with the adverb for "beneficial"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a beneficial way
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