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Suga was born in 1993 in Daegu, Korea. He is a South Korean rapper, songwriter and music producer. He is a member of the Korean boy band BTS. He became interested in rap music after hearing "Ragga Muffin" by Stony Skunk. After listening to Epik High's songs, he decided to become a rapper. More than 100 of his songs have been recognized by the Korea Music Copyright Association. In 2018, he was awarded the Hwagwan Cultural Medal by the President of Korea. In July 2021, he was appointed as Special Presidential Envoy for Future Generations and Culture by President Moon Jae-in. His lyrics deal with the themes of "full of dreams and hopes", conceived with the aim of making his music "a source of strength for many".
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Suga
was born
in 1993 in
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Daegu
, Korea. He is a South Korean rapper, songwriter and
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music
producer. He is a member of the Korean boy band BTS.
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He
became interested in rap
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music
after hearing
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Ragga Muffin
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by Stony Skunk. After listening to
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Epik
High's songs, he decided to become a rapper. More than 100 of his songs have
been recognized
by the Korea
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Music
Copyright Association. In 2018, he
was awarded
the
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Hwagwan
Cultural Medal by the President of Korea. In July 2021, he
was appointed
as Special Presidential Envoy for Future Generations and Culture by President Moon
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Jae-in
. His lyrics deal with the themes of
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full of dreams and hopes
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"
, conceived with the aim of making his
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music
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"
a source of strength for
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many
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IELTS essay write a brief biography about a famous artist

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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