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Write 100 words make you possible

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"Make You Possible" resembles me to enable someone to accept any challenge in any situation. It is an environment that creates a mindset to see obstacles as an opportunity. For example- during the lockdown, when we were forced to stay at home we can not help but continue our studies online. We can't think it without the high-speed internet connectivity and the communications tools that made it possible for us to complete our graduation. Similarly in our life, we need such an environment/workspace/guideline/support that empowers us to handle all adverse situations with courage.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
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Make
You Possible
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
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resembles me to enable someone to accept any challenge in any situation. It is an environment that creates a mindset to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
obstacles as an opportunity.
For example
- during the lockdown, when we
were forced
to stay at home we can not
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help
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but
continue our studies online. We can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it without the high-speed internet connectivity and the communications tools that made it possible for us to complete our graduation.
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Similarly
in our life, we need such an environment/workspace/guideline/support that empowers us to handle all adverse situations with courage.

IELTS essay Write 100 words make you possible

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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