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Would you enjoy an eco-holiday?

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Personally, I think eco-holiday is one of the best way to promote economic growth as well as protect environment. When I join in the holiday, I believe that I can not only explore magnificent places and discover unique cultures I've never experienced but also can ensure that beautiful locations are preserved for the future. Therefore, If I have a chance, I will take part in an ecotourism at least one time.
Personally
, I
think
eco-holiday
is one of the best way to promote economic growth
as well
as protect environment. When I
join
in the holiday, I believe that I can not
only
explore magnificent places and discover unique cultures I've never experienced
but
also
can ensure that
beautiful
locations
are preserved
for the future.
Therefore
, If I have a chance, I will
take part
in an ecotourism at least one time.
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IELTS essay Would you enjoy an eco-holiday?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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