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Would you enjoy an eco-holiday?

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Personally, I think eco-holiday is one of the best way to promote economic growth as well as protect environment. When I join in the holiday, I believe that I can not only explore magnificent places and discover unique cultures I've never experienced but also can ensure that beautiful locations are preserved for the future. Therefore, If I have a chance, I will take part in an ecotourism at least one time.

Personally
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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eco-holiday
 is one of the best way to promote economic growth as well
 as protect environment. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 in the holiday, I believe that I can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 explore magnificent places and discover unique cultures I've never experienced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 can ensure that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 locations are preserved
 for the future. Therefore
, If I have a chance, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in an ecotourism at least one time. 

IELTS essay Would you enjoy an eco-holiday?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

71 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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