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Worlds animall protection indicators

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In the current world, sports has become one of the most discussed agenda across the world. While technology increasingly get sophisticated, humans continue to be protective towards nature. This has made blood sports to loose its popularity because of its cruelty and threat to nature. For this reason i think all forms of blood sports should be stopped. In many occasions, risking the animals lives has attracted attention of different poeple across the globe. Helpless animals are continuously loosing lives for the sake of dangerouse uncivilized and cruel blood sports. For instance, the most trendy thing about animals on twiter in the last few months has been about protection of wild animals from hunters for fun. This has led to extinction of animals like white rhino. Animal rights have gained a lot of interest in the recent past. To encourage this a noble idea, policies have been developed to protect animals from human beings after many debates. In my opinion, this policies shuold be implemented to the latter to make sure animals are safe. It will be an achievement to protect nature. In conclusion, discussions on blood sports has become more common. Currently, communities are becoming enlightened on issues of preservation. It is the reform that clearly indicates need for banning blood sports.
In the
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world,
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sports
has become one of the most discussed agenda across the world. While technology
increasingly
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get
sophisticated, humans continue to be protective towards nature. This has made
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blood
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sports
to
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loose
its popularity
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because
of its cruelty and threat to nature.
For this reason
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think
all forms of
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blood
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sports
should be
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stopped
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In
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many
occasions, risking the
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animals
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lives
has attracted attention of
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different
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poeple
across the globe. Helpless
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animals
are
continuously
loosing
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lives
for the sake of
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dangerouse
uncivilized and cruel
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blood
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sports
.
For instance
, the most trendy thing about
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animals
on
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twiter
in the last few months has been about protection of wild
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animals
from hunters for fun. This has led to extinction of
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animals
like white rhino.

Animal rights have gained
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a lot of
interest in the recent past. To encourage this a noble
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idea
, policies have
been developed
to protect
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animals
from human beings after
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many
debates. In my opinion,
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policies
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shuold
be implemented
to the latter to
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make
sure
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animals
are safe. It will be an achievement to protect nature.

In conclusion
, discussions on
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blood
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sports
has become more common.
Currently
, communities are becoming enlightened on issues of preservation. It is the reform that
clearly
indicates need for banning
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blood
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sports
.
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IELTS essay Worlds animall protection indicators

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
213 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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