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World After Covid Crisis

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Humanity is passing through a survival crisis due to covid 19. Due to global shut down people are facing mental health problem and depression. After the pandemic is over, people will still be fearful and avoid going to social gathering like family functions, religious functions. The person who has lost his/her near or dear one will take more time to overcome the trauma. People will also be avoiding Cinema Hall, Malls, big departmental stores and restaurants because of fear of reoccurrence of coronavirus. Use of public transport is also affected drastically whether it is air, road or rail. People most likely to travel by their own vehicle at least for 6 months after the pandemic is over. The pandemic has already started affecting the economy worldwide. Manufacturing Industries cannot operate during the lockdown. The IMF has recently announced that COVID 19 will lead to the biggest recession of the time. News is prevailing that big companies may lay off a large number of employees worldwide. Mass retrenchment shall lead to unemployment. Immigrants will be worst affected during the pandemic. No doubt, the petrol and diesel cost shall be raised sharply. Unemployment, Recession, less buying capacity may result in the elimination of small retail business. Export, Import, International Treaties, Immigration shall also be worst affected. Work from home culture, however, will be a preferred mode for corporate working. People will prefer packed food over dining out. Healthcare industries including doctors, hospitals shall be in high demand and may become too busy. There will be an increase in the number of subscribers of health insurance. Pharmaceutical companies shall also be making a profit Covid 19 will emerge as a game-changer in the society. Work from home culture shall have become a corporate fashion. People may shift to e-commerce for buying most of the commodities and therefore bright future for some of the service sectors which may include: E-commerce portal and their allied courier services. The most important habit required to be inculcated in our routine shall be to avoid touching things unnecessarily on public places, frequent hand wash even to avoid its re-occurrence as has been seen in previous pandemics
Humanity is passing through a survival crisis due to
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covid 19
. Due to global shut down
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people
are facing mental health problem and depression. After the pandemic is over,
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people
will
still
be fearful and avoid going to social gathering like family functions, religious functions. The person who has lost his/her near or dear one will take more time to overcome the trauma.
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People
will
also
be avoiding Cinema Hall, Malls,
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big
departmental stores and restaurants
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because
of fear of reoccurrence of coronavirus.
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Use
of public transport is
also
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affected
drastically
whether it is air, road or rail.
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People
most likely to travel by their
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own
vehicle at least for 6 months after the pandemic is over.

The pandemic has already
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started
affecting the economy worldwide. Manufacturing Industries cannot operate during the lockdown. The IMF has recently announced that
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COVID 19
will lead to the biggest recession of the time. News is prevailing that
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big
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companies
may lay off
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a large number of
employees worldwide. Mass retrenchment shall lead to unemployment. Immigrants will be worst
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affected
during the pandemic. No doubt, the petrol and diesel cost shall
be raised
sharply
. Unemployment, Recession, less buying capacity may result in the elimination of
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small
retail business. Export, Import, International Treaties, Immigration shall
also
be worst
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affected
. Work from home culture,
however
, will be a preferred mode for corporate working.
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People
will prefer packed food over dining out. Healthcare industries including doctors, hospitals shall be in high demand and may become too busy. There will be an increase in the number of subscribers of health insurance. Pharmaceutical
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companies
shall
also
be making a
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profit


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Covid 19
will emerge as a game-changer in the society. Work from home culture shall have become a corporate fashion.
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People
may shift to e-commerce for buying most of the commodities and
therefore
bright future for
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some of the
service sectors which may include: E-commerce portal and their allied courier services. The most
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important
habit required to
be inculcated
in our routine shall be to avoid touching things
unnecessarily
on public places, frequent hand wash even to avoid its re-occurrence as has been
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seen
in previous
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pandemics
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IELTS essay World After Covid Crisis

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
357 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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