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The two pictures depict the working mechanism of the hot air balloon. One picture shows all the components and the other describes how the height or level of flight of the balloon is achieved. Based on the given picture, we can see that the components of a hot air balloon are: a burner, a basket, a propane cylinder, a rope, a skirt, a n envelope which has panels, gores and the parachute valve. The basket is for the passengers to stand on and have a wonderful ride. There are some propane cylinders kept in the basket which keeps the fire in the burner alive by mixing with air. The hot air produced by the burner when mixed with the cold air from the atmosphere lifts the balloon higher. Hot air is lighter than the cool air which causes the balloon to lift itself higher in the sky. The parachute valve is a self sealing flap that allows hot air to escape at a controlled rate. The height of the balloon depends on how much heat is generated by the burner. More the heat higher will be the flight. The ropes used in the balloon hold the basket the burner and the envelope together.
The two pictures depict the working mechanism of the hot
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air
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balloon
. One picture
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shows
all the components and the other
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describes
how the height or level of flight of the
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balloon
is achieved
. Based on the
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given
picture, we can
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see
that the components of a hot
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air
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balloon
are: a
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burner
, a
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basket
, a propane cylinder, a rope, a skirt,
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a
n envelope which has panels, gores and the parachute valve.

The
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basket
is for the passengers to stand on and have a wonderful ride. There are
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some
propane cylinders
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kept
in the
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basket
which
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keeps
the fire in the
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burner
alive by mixing with
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air
. The hot
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air
produced by the
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burner
when mixed with the
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cold
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air
from the atmosphere lifts the
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balloon
higher. Hot
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air
is lighter than the cool
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air
which causes the
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balloon
to lift itself higher in the sky. The parachute valve is a self sealing flap that
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allows
hot
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air
to escape at a controlled rate. The height of the
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balloon
depends on how much heat
is generated
by the
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burner
. More the heat higher will be the flight. The ropes
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used
in the
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balloon
hold the
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basket
the
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burner
and the envelope together.
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IELTS essay working of hot air balloon

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
203 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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