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some says sharing informations and some says it is too important to share the information

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A number of people were in a belief which says that sharing the latest content or information in any of the fields like scientific research, business and academic world. The remaining other numbers of people believe that sharing information is more than important and valuable too. I strongly agree with the people. When scientists or business people find something new within their respective fields they must need to share that thing because people should learn from those new things like if they find the positive thing these people will try to implement this thing to see the same positive impact in their field too. These are some scenarios where sharing the information will be helpful. We cannot say all the information should be shared immediately everything has its own time for sharing. There is some information which we can say it as a classified one and also such kind of information will be taken by the people in the opposite way of our expectations. So I conclude sharing the information is important and it will definitely help the people, But all the information can't be shared immediately. Some of the information has its own time to share and until that time we need to wait.
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people
were in a belief which says that
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sharing
the latest content or
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information
in any of the fields like scientific research, business and academic world. The remaining other numbers of
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people
believe that
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sharing
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information
is more than
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important
and valuable too. I
strongly
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with the
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.

When scientists or business
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people
find something new within their respective fields they
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must
need to share that thing
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because
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people
should learn from those new things like if they find the
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positive
thing these
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people
will try to implement this thing to
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see
the same
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positive
impact in their field too. These are
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scenarios where
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sharing
the
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information
will be helpful.

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should
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immediately everything has its
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own
time for
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sharing
. There is
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some
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information
which we can say it as a classified one and
also
such kind of
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information
will
be taken
by the
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people
in the opposite way of our expectations.

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So
I conclude
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sharing
the
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information
is
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important
and it will definitely
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help
the
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people
,
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all the
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information
can't
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immediately.
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Some of the
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information
has its
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own
time to share and until that time we need to wait.
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IELTS essay some says sharing informations and some says it is too important to share the information

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
205 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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